is sky a mary sue?

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wanted to do this, skys the main character from my series I'm working on btw ;3 this way you get to learn more about her and i get to see if she needs a bit more work.

[ ] They are possessed by an angel. 
[ ] They are possessed by a demon. 
[ ] They are a werewolf//vampire//faerie. 
[ ] They are physically strong.
[ ] They have a rare hair//fur color. 
[/] Their eyes are an unusual color. (i put a / since she only has one red eye)
[/ ] This eye colour happens to be red.
[ x] Their eyes change colour. ( umm i guess when she has her wings they both become red sooo)
[X] They have wings. 
[x ] They can grow extra body parts//shapeshift. 
[ ] They are immortal. 
[ ] [If female.] They have large boobs.  
[ ] [If male.] They are very muscular. 
[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender. 
[ ] They are telekinetic//pyrokinetic//etc. 
[ ] They have sixth (sense)/can mind-read/etc. 
[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers. 
[ ] They have a special ability//power, but they don't know about it yet.
[ ] They were bestowed//cursed with these powers. 
[ ] They are a healer. 
[/ ] They are from a very rich//royal family. ( i wouldent way rich buut ya i guess royal)
[ x] They don't know that they are from a very rich//royal background. 
[ x] They have lost one/both of their parents. 
[ ] They ran away from home. 
[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc. 
[x ] They witnessed one//both of their parent's death.  
[x ] They are part angel//demon//faerie//some other mythical creature. 
[ ] They never knew their parents. 
[ ] They were abused//spoiled as a child. 
[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender. 
[ ] They have lots of friends
[ ] They are emo//cutesy.  
[ ] They look much younger//older than they really are. 
[ ] They are currently in a relationship.
[ ] They have lots of morals and declare them a fair bit. 
[ ] They have a mental disorder.
[ ] They have an emotional disorder.
[ ] They struggle to stay sane.
[ ] They are a psycho. 
[ ] They have multiple personalities.
[ ] They are very intelligent. 
[ ] They have hallucinations. 
[ ] They can summon spirits//demons//angels etc. 
[ ] They have an unusual//unrealistic pet. 
[ ] They have a guardian spirit. 
[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul. 
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them. 
[ ] They can talk to spirits//ghosts.
[ ] Some part of their body glows. 
[ ] They have a rare//unusual name.
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, etc. 
[ ] They have a twin//sibling that they were separated from at birth//a young age. 
[ ] They are connected with a certain element.
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal. 
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime//manga.
[ ] They are a race//species that is discriminated against//misunderstood. 
[x ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood//feared. 
[x ] They live//lived on the streets at some point in their lives. (thats like episode 3 or 4 ;3)
[x ] They are hiding from someone//something. 
[ ] They have a rare blood type.
[ ] They cry blood. 
[ ] Certain noises//smells//situations//etc. make their powers activate//give them a nervous breakdown. 
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live, a.k.a 'exotic'. 
[ ] They are very mysterious//dark. 
[ ] They are very lively//happy. 
[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly. 
[ ] They are very patient.
[ ] They are from a long line of [insert profession//power here].
[ ] They have a piece of jewellery//clothing that they always wear.
[ ] They have amnesia. 
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition.
[ ] They have some sort of unbeneficial curse upon them. 
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy. 
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'. 
[ ] They have insomnia. 
Overall Points :: 11.5

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Point Reduction :: 
Take points off your OC's overall score if they fit any of the following statements ::

[ ] They smoke. 
[ ] They are an alcoholic.
[ ] They are overweight. 
[ ] They are addicted to drugs.
[x] They have a short temper. 
[ ] They enjoy bullying others.
[X] They do not care much about others. 
[ ] They are relatively emotionless. 

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Final Score :: 9.5
RESULT :: Balanced Character >:3

< 05 :: Anti-Sue.
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally, if they score that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit. 

06-15 :: Balanced Character. 
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though. 

16-25 :: Borderline Mary-Sue. 
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

> 26 :: Mary-Sue. 
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